增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In order to encourage the seniors to take exercise and relax them, we are going to organize a mountain-climbing activity in April 10. We were to gather at the school gate and start at 7:20 a.m. by bus and get back at 7:00 p.m. We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning, on which top we'll have a picnic at the noon. In the afternoon we'll be divided into group and have a free time. Remember take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held late at our school. Besides, taking your lunch and drinking water with you. Unless you want to join, please come to Students' Union and sign up before April 5.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, I went on journey by train. There were such many passengers that not everyone could get a seat. Many people had to stand, which was really tired. I had a reserved seat so I could sit comfortable. In front of my seat is a woman with two little kids. With the kid squeezing into their single seat, she had to stand up all the way. So I moved a bit but shared my seat with her. The woman felt very grateful to my selflessness. Seeing her beautiful smile, I also smiled. Share increased happiness!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, Zhang Pingyu paid visit to London. Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the site she wanted to see. It was the Tower which she visited first. Fancy! This solid stone, square tower had been remained standing for one thousand years. Many new buildings had expanded around it. Therefore, it was still part of a royal palace and prison combined. There followed St Paul's Cathedral built after the terrible fire of London in 1666. It looked splendidly when first built. Westminster Abbey, too, was very interesting. Then just as he came out of the abbey, Pingyu heard the famous sound of the clock Big Ben, ring out the hour.
The next day Pingyu was leaving London to Windsor Castle. "Perhaps I will see the Queen？" she wondered as she fall asleep.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I used to be a person who hates exercising. But after I started playing baseball, I attracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of my spare time, like shopping. Though it wasn't the hard process for me, I needed to make more of an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of work with my teammates as well as the time we spend it together. There is a proverb that goes, "The process is much beautiful than the outcome."
I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, and it doesn't matter. It will only make me keep trying. Only with practising over and over again do I believe I can catch up with other fantastic player one day. The challenge encourages myself to go on.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： ⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My school life in the Britain is significantly different. The school day is nearly 5.5 hours short than that in China. Students there are friendly and focus their studies. With his help, I have adapted to the life soon and make lots of new friends. I feel so luckily to be able to participate in class discussion, that I've learn a lot about local culture. I enjoy the report for the teachers and teachers and the country. Besides I have learnt many skill about completing my projects. My experience is amazed and enjoyable because of my wonderful host family, my friends or the teachers.
